2025年7月5日雅思考试写作回顾

小作文：柱饼混合图，新题，讲的是男女平均受教育时间和最高学历

大作文：Some people think technology mostly benefits our lives, while others believe it brings more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

朗阁讲师点评

本次考试 难度一般

整体分析：

Task 1:静态组合图，包含柱图和饼图。

本次小作文难度一般，虽然数据不详，但是就整体话题来看，静态组合，围绕的是男女平均受教育时间和最高学历。

在进行静态图表描述的过程中，同学们需要充分抓住数据之间的大小关系，例如男性和女性的平均受教育的时间的差异，以及他们所获取的最高学历之间的差异比较。

重点表达：大小排序关系，比较级的使用。需要注意主语和谓语动词之间的搭配情况。

可能会用到的表达：

compared with the female, men spent a larger amount of time on education.

slightly/considerably larger amount of time was occupied on education by men.

Task 2 ：科技类话题

题目翻译：有些人认为科技整体来说对我们的生活有益，但其他人来说，科技带来了更多的坏处。讨论两个观点，并给出你自己的立场。

从话题上来说，这属于科技类话题。该题目并没有局限于哪一个领域的技术，所以给考生的创作空间可以说是相当之大了。技术在交流、医疗、教育、交通中的应用比比皆是，考生们可以选择合适的/自己熟悉的领域来写即可。

从类型上来说，这篇考题属于讨论类文章。考生们在写作的时候建议保持倾向性，例如尽管有所缺陷，但好处更多/尽管带来好处，但缺陷更多等。

从结构上来说，可以采取4段式的写法。此处，老师给出主体段的sample answer，供同学们参考。

On the one hand, technology has undeniably enhanced efficiency and convenience. In the workplace, automation and artificial intelligence have streamlined production, reducing human error and increasing productivity. Additionally, medical advancements, such as robotic surgery and telemedicine, have improved healthcare outcomes and accessibility. Furthermore, digital communication tools like social media and video calls have bridged geographical gaps, allowing people to stay connected regardless of distance. These developments demonstrate how technology fosters progress and convenience.  

On the other hand, critics argue that technology has detrimental effects on society. One major concern is the decline in face-to-face interactions, as people increasingly rely on digital communication, leading to weakened social bonds. Another issue is the rise in cybercrime, including identity theft and online scams, which threaten personal security. Moreover, excessive screen time has been linked to health problems such as eye strain, sleep disorders, and sedentary lifestyles. These drawbacks suggest that technology, if misused, can negatively impact both mental and physical well-being. 

考试建议

1.小作文：柱图、表格等数据图仍然需要格外关注；流程图和地图也需要适当学习；

大作文：社会类考题仍然是关注的重点；其中教育和工作类话题需要多留意。